During my last winter holiday,I went to countryside with my father to visit my grandparents.I find a big change there.The first time I went there,they were living in a small house with dogs,ducks,and another animals.Last winter when I went here again,they had a big separate house to raise dozens of chicken.They also had a small pond which they raised fish.My grandpa said last summer they earned quite a lot by sell the fish.I felt happily that their life had improved.At the end of our trip,I told my father that I planned to return for every two years,but he agreed.
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During my last winter holiday,I went to countryside with my father to visit my grandparents.I a big change there.The first time I went there,they were living in a small house with dogs,ducks,and animals.Last winter when I went again,they had a big separate house to raise dozens of .They also had a small pond / they raised fish.My grandpa said last summer they earned quite a lot by the fish.I felt that their life had improved.At the end of our trip,I told my father that I planned to return every two years, he agreed.