Unit 3 Tomorrow's world
第三层级——背范文、学润色,让作文洋气十足
(2013·湖南高考)请以下列词语为关键词写一篇英语短文。
内容:1.自己或他人的一次经历;2.你的感受。
注意:1.必须使用所给4个关键词;2.词数不少于120个;3.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。
Today was a fine day and never will I forget the special day (倒装句式).I was chosen to be a member of the football match team of Grade 3 and sent to take part in the school football match.I was excited believing I would earn the most scores (现在分词短语作状语).But in the first round I had my leg hurt (过去分词作宾补) and had to give up the game.I was sad to be a loser.My best friend Tom came up to me, saying “You are great! You still played for a few minutes even after your leg was hurt.You are the really winner.” I couldn't believe my ears.For me the one scoring the most (现在分词短语作定语) is the really winner.But Tom said “the one who still tries his best in spite of bad condition (定语从句) is the real winner.You know with the determination, you will change the result sooner or later.”
I am deeply impressed by his words.I want to say to him “Thank you.”
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Last term, I took part in a marathon hosted by the school.So_good_was_I_at_running (我非常擅长跑步。 使用倒装句式) that I had confidence to win the match.When approaching the finish line, I found that one of my competitors fell down and got injured._I_could_have_chosen_to_leave_him_alone(我本可以选择不管他。 使用“情态动词+have done”形式) and dashed to the end, but I stopped to help him.There was no doubt that the result was not so good and people called me loser.
However, winner_as_I_was_not (尽管我不是赢家。使用as引导的让步状语从句), I found that I was also very delighted and satisfied.Sometimes it_is_kindness_rather_than_grades_that_plays_a_more_significant_role_in_our_life (在生活中更有意义的是善举而不是成绩。使用强调句式).Though I was a loser in the match, I was a winner in my life.
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