Module 3 My First Ride on a Train
Section Ⅳ Writing
写作指导
Ⅰ.佳作展示与背诵
假如你是王林,今年暑假乘火车与父母去拉萨(Lhasa)旅游。请根据下列内容要点用英语写一篇短文:
1.舒适、宽敞的旅游列车;
2.享受到良好的服务;
3.沿途风光迷人;
4.你 的感受。
注意:
1.词数:100左右;
2.可适当增加细节,使行文连贯;
3.参考词汇:氧气系统 oxygen sys tem;草原grassland;服务员attendant
One possible version
I will never forget my first trip to Lhasa.I went there with my parents during this summer vacation.
The cruise train is wide,bright and modern,which makes us quite comfortable.The two oxygen systems make sure that passengers breathe completely easily.The attendants on the train provided us with the best service.Smiling faces and polite words were aro und us all the time.What's more,I appreciated the beautiful scenery all the way.The snowcovered mountains,the endless grassland and some villages in the mountains made me excited.
It was rea lly an unforgettable jou rney.I was amazed that our country had changed so much.