F1 书面表达记叙文
F1 [2013·浙江卷]
请以“One Thing I'm Proud of”为题， 用英语写一篇100—120个词的短文， 记述一件你自己认为得意的事情。要求如下：
1. 记述事情经过；
2. 简要说明你感到得意的原因或从中得到的启示。
注意：文章的标题已给出(不计词数)。
One Thing I'm Proud of
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【思路点拨】 从文章体裁分析，这是较典型的开放式记叙文写作，主要让考生就one thing I'm proud of展开叙述，同时写出自豪的原因和启示。考生要根据自己的经历，先要详细叙述事情，然后补充一定的自我剖析以及对此的看法和评述等。文章可以从三方面来写：第一部分简要叙述自豪的事情；第二部分重点讲述事件的经过，可以按照事件发展的顺序写；第三部分则要说明自豪的理由。在写作过程中，要注意好词好句的运用，可以使用remember, be amazed at，be determined to do, learn the techniques, keep practising, at the end of, be proud of, fulfil one's potential, achieve one's goal等重要的词汇和词组。句式要多样化，如可以用名词性从句：it helps me realize that we all can fulfil our potential and achieve our goals through hard work；状语从句：Then I kept practising until I became confident…；非谓语结构：Amazed at how skilful they were, I was…等等。
One possible version：
One Thing I'm Proud of
I still remember how I became a good table tennis player.
The first day I went to high school, I saw some of my classmates playing table tennis. Amazed at how skilful they were, I was determined to be just as good. Later on, I often watched them carefully to learn their techniques. Then I kept practising until I became confident enough to challenge the good players. At the end of the term I became one of the best players in my class.
