写作微技能
读后续写思维拓展训练之1——用动作细节描写表达感情
佳句观摩
1.他很困。
概括描写:He is very sleepy.
细节描述:He covered his mouth to hide his yawn (捂住嘴不让人看见他打哈欠).
2.我们很惊讶。
概括描写:We are very surprised.
细节描述:Our mouths dropped open in surprise (惊奇地张大嘴巴).
3.她非常生气。
概括描写:She was very angry.
细节描述:She folded her arms and glared at him (交叉双臂,怒视着他).
4.她非常兴奋。
概括描写:She was very excited.
细节描述:She jumped to her feet with joy (高兴地跳起来) at the news.