写作微技能
读后续写思维拓展训练之21——增强表现力之四
运用修辞手法之明喻
明喻(simile)是比喻修辞的一种，在强调两种事物的相似点的同时，本体、喻体、喻词都出现，且能使语言生动形象。喻词有like, as, as...as, as if, of, compared to, be similar to, what等。
佳句观摩
1.I feel like I am floating in an ocean of sadness. (情感描写)
我感觉自己像漂浮在悲伤的海洋中。
2．Clusters of stars decorated the vast sky like sparkling jewels. (景物描写)
繁星像闪闪发光的珠宝一样装饰了浩瀚的天空。
3．Mrs Sather looked at my eyes as if (she were) seeing my inner self locked away inside. (动作描写)
萨瑟老师看着我的眼睛，仿佛看到了我灵魂深处封闭的自我。
4．Father rushed to his son's school, only to discover the building was as flat as a pancake. (景物描写)
父亲冲到儿子的学校后，才发现这座建筑已经变成一片废墟。
