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Last Saturday, I ①went to the school playground to watch the final of the 4×100metre relay at our annual sports tournament. It was an ②extraordinary experience and something I will never forget.
Before the race, everyone was ③quiet and still. I had never imagined that the atmosphere at a sports event could be so intense. ④When the runners set off, everyone went wild! We all stood up and started cheering and shouting. It was like being hit by a huge wave of excitement. I could see the runners straining to run as fast as they could, while trying not to drop their batons at the change. The race was all over in just one minute. ⑤It was Li Chong, the fastest student in our school, who first crossed the finish line. ⑥Everyone was on their feet, cheering. I was also caught up in the excitement and cheered so hard that I thought my lungs would burst! ⑦It was so wonderful to be part of this sporting moment and enjoy its speed and passion.
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[学语言]
①叙述过去发生的事情使用一般过去时。
②使用形容词extraordinary描述了这次经历难忘的原因。
③使用形容词quiet和still形象地描写出了比赛前的紧张气氛。
④使用went wild，cheering，shouting等词语生动形象地描写出了比赛开始后的场面。
⑤强调句的使用非常恰当地突出了最后的获胜者是谁。
⑥使用cheering，excitement以及so ...that句型描写出了比赛后的情景。
⑦最后一句用形容词wonderful和动词enjoy描写出了作者的感受。
[学结构]
General introduction→What I saw and heard before the event→What I saw and heard during the event→What I saw and heard after the event→How I felt
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