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Charlie Chaplin was a British actor, filmmaker and composer.He became famous in the 1910s，①when films were silent and in black and white.
Charlie Chaplin was one of the best comedy actors of his time②because he knew how to use his body and facial features to make people laugh.③In my opinion, the funniest thing about Charlie Chaplin was the way he walked when he was acting as the Tramp, ④who is his most famous character.The Tramp is a poor man with a kind heart who has unexpected adventures.These adventures, often⑤ involving the police, are usually the funniest scenes.
My favourite Charlie Chaplin film is Modern Times and my favourite scene is in the factory where Charlie Chaplin is working on a production line.When a bee starts circling around Charlie's face, he falls behind with his work.⑥It's so funny to watch him trying to keep up！
I think the power of Charlie Chaplin's works is ⑦not only in his acting, but also in the stories and characters he created.The Tramp is a symbol of the silent cinema and even after so many years, he is still able to make people laugh.
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[学语言]
①使用when引导的非限制性定语从句使句式表达更加简洁。
②使用从属连词because引出原因，使表达更明确。
③使用介词短语In my opinion引出自己最喜欢卓别林的具体方面。
④who引导的非限制性定语从句使句子更加紧凑。
⑤现在分词作定语使句式更富有变化。
⑥It作形式主语使语言表达更地道。
⑦not only ...but also ...结构增强了语义的层次感。
[学结构]
General introduction→Why I like him→My favourite work→My comments
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