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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The Meredith family lived in a small community. As the economy was in decline, some people in the town had lost their jobs. Many of their families were struggling to make ends meet. People were trying to help each other meet the challenges.
Mrs. Meredith was a most kind and thoughtful woman. She spent a great deal of time visiting the poor. She knew they had problems, and they needed all kinds of help. When she had time, she would bring food and medicine to them.
One morning she told her children about a family she had visited the day before. There was a man sick in bed, his wife, who took care of him and could not go out to work, and their little boy. The little boy—his name was Bernard—had interested her very much.
“I wish you could see him,” she said to her own children, John, Harry, and Clara.“He is such a help to his mother. He wants very much to earn some money, but I dont see what he can do.”
After their mother left the room, the children sat thinking about Bernard. “I wish we could help him to earn money,” said Clara.“His family is suffering so much.”
“So do I,” said Harry.“We really should do something to assist them.”
For some moments, John said nothing, but, suddenly, he sprang to his feet and cried,“I have a great idea! I have a solution that we can all help accomplish (完成).”
The other children also jumped up all attention. When John had an idea, it was sure to be a good one. “I tell you what we can do,” said John.“You know that big box of corn Uncle John sent us? Well, we can make popcorn(爆米花), and put it into paper bags, and Bernard can take it around to the houses and sell it.”
注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
When Mrs. Meredith heard of Johns idea, she thought it was a good one, too.
With everything ready, Bernard started out on his new business.
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【文本分析】
Topic:help others to get through difficulty together
Time:the economy was in decline
Place:in a small community
Main characters: Mrs. Meredith, Merediths children (John,Harry,Clara)and Bernard
【故事情节】
Para.1:经济衰退,人们互助共渡难关。
Para.2:善良的Meredith夫人主动帮助生活困难的人。
Para.3~4:Meredith夫人希望孩子们帮助Bernard。
Para.5~8:孩子们商量并找到帮助Bernard的办法。
【续写方向】
借助已梳理的故事情节,通读两个续写段落所给的第一句,确定续写方向。
Para.1 ①想法如何实施?
②需要哪些准备工作?
③Bernard如何出场?
Para.2 ①生意结果如何?
②Bernard有什么感受?
③事件最终有什么影响?
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