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The redcrowned crane is one of the largest cranes in the world, standing at about 150 cm tall.Its feathers are as white as snow, except for some black ones on its face, neck and wings.Its unique feature, from which it gets its name, is the bright red skin on the top of its head.The redcrowned crane is found in China, Russia, Mongolia, Japan and the Korean Peninsula.In China, it spends the warmer months in the rivers and wetlands in the northeast.When the weather gets cold, it migrates to eastcentral China.Its food includes fish, snails and water plants.The redcrowned crane is a symbol of long life and good luck in Chinese culture.
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[学语言]
本文主要介绍了中国的一种珍稀动物——丹顶鹤。范文介绍了丹顶鹤的外形、栖息地、迁徙行为以及在中国文化中的寓意。时态主要运用了一般现在时，人称以第三人称为主；语言上使用as ...as结构，把丹顶鹤的羽毛比喻成白雪。
另外，作者运用了高级句式，如使用现在分词短语作定语，“介词＋关系代词”引导定语从句等，给文章增色不少。
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总体介绍(世界上最大的鹤之一)→具体介绍(外形特征、栖息地、迁徙行为、饮食习惯)→其他介绍(文化寓意)
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