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Nowadays, idol-worshiping is popular among teenagers. The idols are their heroes. They admire them, they imitate them, and their world seems to be filled with them. Recently, a pair of parents from Zhejiang province took their daughter, a middle school student, to a fan meeting for her favorite star in Shanghai, even though there was a typhoon in the city that day. Teenagers respond differently to the event.
Wang Yuxin, 17:
I don't agree with the parents' idea. To make their idol more popular, students often spend much money supporting them. They waste their time on these stars, which should be spent studying. What about the scientists who make lots of contributions to the development of society? Many people don't even know these scientists’ names.
Wang Yidi. 15:
I agree with the parents’ action. It's normal for a teenager to have a favorite star. In some aspects, the star they like is a reflection of the person they want to be. So, the star may motivate them to work harder. I admire parents who take their children to fan meetings, and I believe the experience will leave a great impression on these teenagers.
