Writing 1(2019浙江6月)
假定你是李华,经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex即将返回自己的国家。请给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.表示感谢;
2.回顾Alex对你的帮助;
3.临别祝愿。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
答案
[写作提示]
1.本文是应用文,题材是感谢信,主要内容是对曾经帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex表示感谢。因此文章内容要诚恳,表达真情实感。
2.文章的时态比较复杂。表示感谢可以用一般现在时;回顾过去的事情可以用一般过去时;祝愿部分可以用一般将来时。
3.文章可以分为三段:第一段表示感谢,第二段回顾帮助,第三段写祝愿。
One possible version:
Dear Alex,
It's really a pity that you will leave us and go back to your country. On the occasion of parting, I would like to express my deep gratitude to you. Thank you very much for your help with my English study over the months.
For various reasons, my English was not very good.But your timely help made a difference. With your patient and effective help, my English has improved a lot.What's more, thanks to your help, I now have confidence in my English study and have effective learning strategies.
Parting is inevitable, but I believe our friendship will last forever. Wish you all the best and a good journey back home.
Yours,
Li Hua
