Ⅰ.短文改错(10分)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
After school today, I took a walk in the park, depressing and down. I have made considerable efforts win the talent contest, but I only finished fourth. Just while I was crying, a boy in glasses walked by. He noticed me and came over. He played me a piece of Beethoven's symphony with his mobile phone. Beside, he said Beethoven wrote it as his hearing grew worse. Hearing his word, I was no longer in tears. I came to realize that if we put all our efforts into that we loved, we could create great things no matter what obstacles were in the front of us. I was true thankful for their encouragement.
答案：
After school today, I took a walk in the park, and down. I made considerable efforts win the talent contest, but I only finished fourth. Just while I was crying, a boy glasses walked by. He noticed me and came over. He played me a piece of Beethoven's symphony with his mobile phone. ， he said Beethoven wrote it as his hearing grew worse. Hearing his , I was no longer in tears. I came to realize that if we put all our efforts into we loved, we could create great things no matter what obstacles were in front of us. I was thankful for encouragement.
