写作(共两节，满分35分)
第一节 短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
[2019·青岛质检]Yesterday, I was walked my dog in the evening when I saw the poor child who was selling some key chains. He had five key chains and asked for me to buy one. I asked myself, “Is he selling this build a house？” My heart answered, “No, this is for satisfying his hungry tonight.” I bought all the key chain and offered him milk and biscuits. I gave her a smiley key chain back as a gift, but his smile was awesome. I feel great satisfaction in my heart at that moment. I believe that life will be successfully if you win a smile from someone.
答案与解析：
Yesterday, I was my dog in the evening when I saw poor child who was selling some key chains. He had five key chains and asked me to buy one. I asked myself, “Is he selling this build a house？” My heart answered, “No, this is for satisfying his tonight.” I bought all the key and offered him milk and biscuits. I gave a smiley key chain back as a gift, his smile was awesome. I great satisfaction in my heart at that moment. I believe that life will be if you win a smile from someone.
①walked改为walking 此处表示当作者昨天晚上正在遛狗的时候。表示过去正在进行的动作，应用过去进行时，故将walked改为walking。
②the改为a 此处表示作者看见一个卖钥匙链的可怜的孩子。这里是第一次提到这个小孩，故非特指，不需要用the，且poor的发音以辅音音素开头，故将the改为a。
③删除for ask sb. to do sth.为固定搭配，意为“要求某人做某事”，故删除for。
④在build前加to 此处表示“小男孩卖钥匙链是为了建房子吗？”这里应用不定式表示目的，故在build前加to。
⑤hungry改为hunger 形容词性物主代词后面应接名词，故将hungry改为hunger。
⑥chain改为chains 根据上文中的key chains和前面的all可知，此处应用chain的复数形式，故将chain改为chains。
⑦her改为him 根据上文中的he可知，这个可怜的孩子是男生，故将her改为him。
⑧but改为and 根据语境可知，前后部分是并列关系，而不是转折关系，故将but改为and。
⑨feel改为felt 根据时间状语at that moment可知，此处应用一般过去时，故将feel改为felt。
⑩successfully改为successful be动词后面接形容词作表语，故将successfully改为successful。
