写作(共两节，满分35分)
第一节 短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
[2019·大庆市第一次质检]
About two years ago a new project was started in our school. I was working with one of my schoolmate. We had never work together before but we got along well. After the project, we started to spend some time together in school. One day we decided to take walk. Ever since that walk we had been best friends.
However, it hasn't only been such easy. We have gone through both easy and hard times. But I'm specially grateful to the hard times, because they have taught me a lot. My best friend has changed we. She has made me to believe in myself. And now I am focusing on achieve one of my biggest dreams. Without her, I wouldn't even have realized that my biggest dream is.
答案与解析：
About two years ago a new project was started in our school. I was working with one of my . We had never together before but we got along well. After the project, we started to spend some time together in school. One day we decided to take walk. Ever since that walk we been best friends.
However, it hasn't only been easy. We have gone through both easy and hard times. But I'm specially grateful the hard times, because they have taught me a lot. My best friend has changed . She has made me believe in myself. And now I am focusing on one of my biggest dreams. Without her, I wouldn't even have realized my biggest dream is.
①schoolmate改为schoolmates “one of＋可数名词复数”为固定用法，意为“……之一”，故将schoolmate改为schoolmates。
②work改为worked 此处表示过去的过去，应用过去完成时，其构成为“had＋动词的过去分词”，故将work改为worked。
③在walk前加a take a walk为固定短语，意为“散步”，故在walk前加a。
④had改为have 根据句首的时间状语Ever since that walk可知，此处应用现在完成时，故把had变成have。
⑤such改为so 此处修饰形容词easy，应用副词，故将such改为so。
⑥to改为for be grateful to常用于表示感激某人，be grateful for常用于表示感激某事。此处表示作者尤其感激困难时期，应用for，故将to改为for。
⑦we改为us 该词位于谓语动词的后面，用作宾语，故应用人称代词宾格形式，故将we改为us。
⑧删除to make是使役动词，其后接不带to的动词不定式作宾语补足语，故删除to。
⑨achieve改为achieving 此处前面的on是介词，其后应接名词、代词或动名词作宾语，故此处应用动名词形式，故将achieve改为achieving。
⑩that改为what 分析句子结构可知，此处为宾语从句，引导词在从句中作表语，故将that改为what。
