写作(共两节，满分35分)
第一节 短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
[2019·湖南岳阳市质检二]One day, my little brother bought an ice cream in the street, enjoying to eating it. Unexpected, he saw his friend coming toward him, so he hurriedly hid the ice creams behind him. After he greeted his friend, they begin to talk. His friend had the dog with him. When he stopped to talk with his brother, his dog moved around. The dog was such glad to find the ice cream in my brother's hand and it began to eat it with greater pleasure. My brother felt embarrassed that he hadn't shared the ice cream for his friend, he gave the ice cream to the dog. Then he bought another two for his friend and himself.
答案与解析：
One day, my little brother bought an ice cream in the street, enjoyingeating it. , he saw his friend coming toward him, so he hurriedly hid the ice behind him. After he greeted his friend, they to talk. His friend had dog with him. When he stopped to talk with brother, his dog moved around. The dog was glad to find the ice cream in my brother's hand and it began to eat it with pleasure. My brother felt embarrassed that he hadn't shared the ice cream his friend, he gave the ice cream to the dog. Then he bought another two for his friend and himself.
①删除to enjoy为及物动词，其后直接接宾语，enjoy doing sth.为固定搭配，意为“喜欢做某事；享受做某事”，此处to多余，故删除to。
②Unexpected改为Unexpectedly 此处在句中作状语，修饰整个句子，应用副词，故将Unexpected改为Unexpectedly。注意首字母大写。
③creams改为cream 根据语境可知，此处特指刚才买的那一个冰激凌，应用单数形式，故将creams改为cream。
④begin改为began 根据本句的时间状语After he greeted his friend可知，此处表示发生在过去的动作，应用一般过去时，故将begin改为began。
⑤the改为a 根据语境可知，朋友身边带着一条狗，此处是第一次提及，应用不定冠词修饰，且dog的发音以辅音音素开头，故将the改为a。
⑥his改为my 根据上文中的my little brother可知，此处指“我的”弟弟，故将his改为my。
⑦such改为so 此处glad为形容词，应该用副词来修饰，而such修饰名词，so为副词，修饰形容词，故将such改为so。
⑧greater改为great 根据上下文可知，此处无比较意义，应用形容词原级，故将greater改为great。
⑨for改为with share sth. with sb.为固定搭配，意为“与某人分享某物”，故将for改为with。
⑩在he前加so/and My brother felt embarrassed that he hadn't shared the ice cream...和he gave the ice cream to the dog都是完整的句子，两个句子之间缺少连词；根据语境可知，弟弟因为没有与他的朋友分享冰激凌而感到很尴尬，所以/然后他把那个冰激凌给了朋友的狗。此处前后分句之间为因果关系或顺承关系，故在he 前加so/and。
