假如你是李华,擅长中国画,正在美国一所高中交流学习。老师Julie邀请你给同学们上一节课,简单介绍中国画。请你给她回一封电子邮件,要点如下:
1.接受邀请;
2.介绍上课计划;
3.建议学生做课前准备。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【思路点拨】
1.审题五定
(1)定体裁——写邮件。(2)定人称——第一人称。(3)定时态——一般将来时、一般现在时、现在进行时。(4)定要点:接受邀请;介绍有关中国画的上课计划;建议学生应做哪些课前准备。(5)定基调:根据与收件人的关系及邮件的具体内容确定所写内容的基调,比如,如果是好友且又是邮件,那么文中的语言应该是非正式的。
2.构思谋篇:三段式,第一段开门见山说明接受邀请和写邮件的目的;第二段围绕要点2和3展开;最后一段安排一两句客套话,应做到首尾呼应。
3.精心斟酌词汇和句型,交叉使用长短句。
4.注意要点内容之间的衔接自然、流畅、通顺。
【范文研读】研读学构思,熟读学词句
Dear Julie,
I feel greatly honored to be invited to give a traditional Chinese painting lesson.I’m writing to express my thanks and offermyarrangements for this class.
First of all,I’ll show some paintings to arousethestudents’curiosity and help them distinguish different painting styles.In this way,the students can acquirethefundamentalknowledgeof Chinese painting,such as colours and elements.Afterwards,I’ll presentsomebasictechniquesabout how to create a simple work.Then they’ll have adequate hands-onopportunities.At the same time,I’ll coach them and givetimelyhelp.By the way,please remind the students to make preparations inadvance which involve brushes,paper and ink.
Let me know if you come up with any good idea.
Yours,
Li Hua
