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请根据以下内容写一篇文章介绍中国科学家屠呦呦。
1.屠呦呦1930年生于宁波,儿童时期就对中医产生了兴趣。
2.1951年考入北京大学。1955年,以优异的成绩毕业于北京医学院。
3.毕业后她一直致力于中医的研究。很多成果受到了高度评价。
4.她因为发现青蒿素而出名,青蒿素用于治疗疟疾,拯救了数百万人的性命。
5.2011年屠呦呦获得拉斯克奖,是世界上最受推崇的科学奖之一。2015年,她获得了诺贝尔医学奖。她成为了首个获科学类诺贝尔奖的中国科学家。
参考词汇:青蒿素 artemisinin; 疟疾 malaria;拉斯克奖 the Lasker Award;诺贝尔医学奖 the Nobel Prize in Medicine
注意:1.词数:100个左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
第一步:审题谋篇
1.体裁:记叙文;
2.时态:一般过去时为主;
3.人称:第三人称;
4.结构:首段:总述,
中段:具体介绍屠呦呦的经历及成就。
第二步:词汇推敲
1.a_famous_Chinese_medical_scientist 一位著名的中国女科学家
2.win_the_Nobel_Prize 获得诺贝尔奖
3.be_born_in 出生于
4.be_admitted_into 被录取
5.devote_one's_life_to 毕业致力于
6.be_well_known_for 以……而出名
第三步:句式锻造
1.屠呦呦是中国著名的医学科学家。
Tu Youyou is a_famous_Chinese_medical_scientist.
2.2015年,她获得了诺贝尔医学奖。她成为首个获科学类诺贝尔奖的中国科学家。
In 2015, She won_the_Nobel_Prize_in_Medicine. She became_the_first_Chinese_scientist_to_win a Nobel Prize in science.
3.1951年她被北京大学录取,1955年以优异的成绩毕业于北京医学院。
She was_admitted_into Beijing University in 1951 and graduated_from Beijing Medical College in 1955 with excellent results.
4.毕业后她一直致力于中医的研究。
After graduation, she devoted_all_her_life_to the research of Chinese medicine.
5.她因为发现青蒿素而出名,青蒿素用于治疗疟疾。青蒿素拯救了数百万人的性命。
She is_well_known_for discovering artemisinin, used to treat malaria. Artemisinin saved millions of people's lives.
6.2011年屠呦呦获得拉斯克奖。它是世界上最受推崇的科学奖之一。
She got the Lasker Award in 2011. It is one of the most respected science prizes in the world.
第四步:句式升级
7.把第2句升级为ving作状语。
In_2015_she_won_the_Nobel_Prize_in_medicine,_becoming_the_first_Chinese_scientist_to_won_a_Nobel_Prize_in_science.
8.用定语从句合并5的两个句子。
She is well known for discovering artemisinin, used to treat malaria, which_saved_millions_of_people's_lives.
9.用定语从句合并6的两个句子。
She got the Lasker Award in 2011, which_is_one_of_the_most respected science prizes in the world.
第五步:妙笔成篇
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参考答案:
Tu Youyou is a famous Chinese medical scientist. In 2015 she won the Nobel Prize in Medicine, becoming the first Chinese scientist to win a Nobel Prize in science.
Tu Youyou was born in Ningbo in 1930. When she was a child, she took interest in Chinese medicine. She was admitted into Beijing University in 1951 and graduated from Beijing Medical College in 1955 with excellent results. After graduation, she devoted all her life to the research of Chinese medicine and a number of her achievements were highly thought of by many people. She is well known for discovering artemisinin, used to treat malaria, which saved millions of people's lives. She got the Lasker Award in 2011, which is one of the most respected science prizes in the world.