【2019·全国卷II】
假定你是校排球队队长李华。请写封邮件告知你的队友Chris球队近期将参加比赛,内容包括:
1.比赛信息;
2.赛前准备;
3.表达期待。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】
Dear Chris,
I’m writing to let you know that we will have a volleyball match next month. The match will take place in our school gym on the afternoon of July 4th. We will play against the team from HongXing High School. In order to win the match, we should get fully prepared and practice hard. So from tomorrow, we need to train for two hours after school every day. Please come to the school gym at 6:30 pm from Monday to Friday.
You’re an excellent player. With you on the team, we are confident that we can win the game. Let’s try hard together!
Cheers,
Li Hua
【分析】今年的书面表达沿袭近几年的体裁,仍旧是应用文。本次书面表达要求考生写一封邮件告知队友有关比赛的信息。
本篇书面表达是一封告知信。首先要告知写信目的;然后简明扼要地告知排球比赛的时间、地点以及赛前的准备事项,注意事件信息的三要素:时间、地点、人物,要交代清楚;第三则要表达对队友的期待和鼓励。
【点睛】本文内容完整,详略得当,并运用了高级句式。I’m writing to let you know that we will have a volleyball match next month.宾语从句;In order to win the match不定式作目 状语。文章语言流畅,上下文转换自然。
3. 【2019·全国卷III】
假定你是李华,你校将举办音乐节。请写封邮件邀请你的英国朋友Allen参加,内容包括:
1.时间;
2.活动安排;
3.欢迎他表演节目。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【范文】
Dear Allen,
How is everything going? Our school will hold a music festival next Sunday morning in the school hall. And I’m writing to invite you to join us.
The opening ceremony will start at 9:00 am, and the schoolmaster will deliver a speech. Then there will be various fantastic performances played by talented students. You are definitely welcome to show up on stage, which will add color and fun to our festival.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【解析】
今年的书面表达要求考生写邮件,告知英国朋友音乐节的情况。
【详解】首先确定提纲。先介绍写作目的,之后介绍音乐节的时间、活动安排等具体信息,最后欢迎他表演节目。
第二,根据提纲,确定关键词语,如:How is everything going? a music festival,in the school hall,The opening ceremony等。
第三,注意选用合适的连接词将各要点串联起来。
【点睛】本文内容完整,详略得当。并使用了高级句式。如:You are definitely welcome to show up on stage, which will add color and fun to our festival.定语从句。提升了文章档次。