一、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及二个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Yesterday was my 18th birthday. As Father and Mother thought it was a big occasion for me, they suggested I held a birthday party at home to celebrate it. By 4 o'clock I was pleased to see all my friends had come with a lot of beautiful present. Mother cooked a big meal. They spent a wonderful night together, eating and talking happily. The most excited moment was when Mother put a big birthday cake on the table and all my friends begin to sing Happy Birthday. Saw the 18 candles burning, I couldn't keep back my tears. Without Mother and Father's love, I wouldn't be leading so a happy life now. Mother asked me make a wish before I blew out all the candles. After that, everyone enjoyed the sweet birthday cake and shared with my happiness. I am eighteen years old now, it means I've become an adult and have more responsibility. I'll do my best to return my parents' love and live up to their expectations.
