第二节:短文写作(共1题;满分30分)
请根据以下提示,并结合具体事例,用英语写一篇短文。
Small things make a big difference. The small things we do can make us a responsible member of the society.
注意:①无须写标题;
②除诗歌外,文体不限;
③内容必须结合你生活中的具体事例;
④文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称;
⑤词数不少于120,如引用提示语则不计入总词数。
【考点】考察开放性作文
【写作指导】
本文属于开放性作文,要求我们就:我们做的微小的事情都可以对我们的社会产生很大的影响。告诉我们要关注生活中的小事。仍然属于议论文,可以使用一般现在时和第三人称。当然也可以写成记叙文,叙述一件小事让我们懂得要关注细节。
要点:1.叙述生活中发生的一件小事;以及这件小事对我们产生的影响。2.说明任何一件小事都会对我们的社会产生很大的影响。告诉我们要重视这样的小事。
首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型,在你的能力范围之内,选择句式时要赋予变化,因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词,把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体,如besides, further, last but not least等。在发表个人观点的时候,可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采,也能增加得高分的可能性。
【一句多译】
我在去书店的路上,在十字路口等待的时候,一个十岁左右的女孩还被一辆开得很快的汽车撞倒。
① I was on my way to the bookstore and was waiting for the green light at a crossing when a girl of about ten was knocked down by a passing car, which drove off quickly.
②I was on my way to the bookstore and was waiting for the green light at a crossing when a girl of about ten was knocked down by a passing car, driving off quickly.
【参考范文】
It isn’t hard to grow up into a responsible member of society.
I can well remember an incident that happened on a rainy Sunday afternoon. I was on my way to the bookstore and was waiting for the green light at a crossing when a girl of about ten was knocked down by a passing car, which drove off quickly. A man immediately rushed to the girl to give her first aid and I joined in without hesitation. Luckily she was not badly injured and we sent her to the nearest hospital. Compared with the escaped driver, I am proud of what I did.
As a member of the society, I am aware that being responsible is what it takes to make a better society.